Cinemassively: F**k Me Pumps
I like that she tried to work a storyline in, but it definitely has flaws. The video staggers a bit in certain areas, the lipsynching is off, and the music stutters in one scene. In addition, she seems to have thrown a mishmash of transitions and titling effects in for good measure. However, I think once she refines her technique a bit, she'll come out with something great.