I think it could use more punch line highlight. Think about when you read a funny article over at Cracked. The language goes out of its way to point out This is the funny -- this is the part you laugh at. Subheaders, pictures, and even sentence structure spell out those vital moments. You can't miss them. SI needs to find a way to import that highlight into the videos; it'd help break up the narration a bit.
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