The video's okay. I like the idea and the soundtrack, but I think some of the videography got away from them. Lag's almost inevitable when you're recording on some systems, but the lag really penalized establishing shots in this video. Also, while the game's screen is square, that effect makes the video look vertical on YouTube.
These are fairly technical points, and the overall impression of The Päck is pretty good. Still, for the next round, I'd tackle those issues.
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