It's not that the concept is bad. It's actually quite a cute idea, and the video is put together in earnestness. I think some overacting could have helped it, or maybe faster pacing. Again, I can't point to anything and say, "This is bad." But when the final video hit my screen, it just didn't work for me. What do you guys think?
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