The graphics in the video are fair for this genre; compare Slightly Impressive to early Wowcrendor, and the animation is about on par. Where Slightly is struggling is voice acting. It still feels a little too even-toned and short of emotion. I would consider doing a video with what you might perceive as wild overacting just for comparison.
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